Child's Play 2014 (written by PoC's own... The Doctor)
Mar 31, 2014 10:36:06 GMT -12
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Post by The Doctor on Mar 31, 2014 10:36:06 GMT -12
Okay boys and girls... this is my idea of a remake concept for Child's Play. I don't have particular actors and actresses in mind, but I do have a great way to retell this tale. It hit me like a bolt of lightning and this will be an ongoing progress but without further adieu... here is my brain child.
Child's Play
Chapter 1: Let’s meet Charles
We are in an underground subway station where we a see a beautiful woman in her late 20's waiting alone for the next train. A relatively handsome man, with long dark brown hair, which appears to be in his late 20's early 30's approaches her and asks “Do you have a light?”
Slightly weary of him yet slightly attracted by him she replies "No sorry I don't smoke," with a nervous smile.
He says "That's okay, it isn't like smoking is what's going to kill you anyway."
She replies "Wha...." and before even finishing a word he grabs her, puts his gloved hand over her mouth and drags her away.
We are then taken to a strange looking room that is dark, and has hardwood floors. We see the woman restrained by each limp being tied down by a leather strap and each strap being nailed into the floor. Beneath her is a pentagram that is drawing out in sand, and she is surrounded by candles. She looks over and up to her left and sees this man that did this to her. He is lighting candles at what appears to be a mantle with a mirror hanging above. He is wearing leather pants, with no shirt.
A very attractive blonde walks in and says "When will the ritual begin?"
He says "Oh... very soon" then they share a rather lustful kiss.
He then gets down on his knees above where this woman’s head is resting. The blonde woman puts a cloak on him, and then hands him a rather strange looking knife. He then starts saying all these weird words and speaking in tongues. He clasps the knife with both hands and raises it high above his head as his words intensify in volume. We see the woman trying desperately to scream through her duct taped mouth as tears flow from her eyes. We see the knife go down and the scene cuts to black.
We are then taken to this same scene but hours later where a forensic team is there investigating. We pan over to a man who appears to be angry, and in disbelief at the same time.
A man walks over to him and says "Detective Norris, we found this note." The note reads "Hi Mikey, Nice try but you're too late once again." in which this note bears a weird emblem.
This isn’t the first note that this Detective has received from this maniac. Frustrated by the note he scampers off stomping his feet and slamming everything he comes across that isn't part of the crime scene.
His partner tries to calm him down but he replies "What does it take to get this sick bastard off of my streets?" He then huffs and puffs and sighs "Ah... we have once again tell someone's family that their daughter has been killed."
We then cut to a scene in which this time this maniac not only have one, but two victims in what appears to be a hotel room. He tells his lover, who’s wearing some sort of ritual mask, to take the one of the victims to the bathroom and get her prepared. As she does the woman having her mouth and hands duct taped together kicks his lover in her legs in and runs out of the hotel room.
He screams "NOOOOOOO!"
His lover says "I’m sorry; I am so sorry"
He grabs her by the hair and says "We don't have time for this shit. We need to get the *censored* out of here."
She then says "What about her?" referring to the other girl tied on the bed.
He says "Here is what I am going to do about this *censored*" as he grasps her neck with both hands to strangle her and she is dead within seconds.
The woman who escaped is now at the police station sitting with Detective Mike Norris.
He says "Now Sarah, please tell me everything you know about this man."
Still shaken and just finding out her best friend didn't make it out alive, she says "I know him, his name is Charles Lee Ray. He attends an art class I belong to. I knew he was different, quiet, but always friendly... I didn't think... he'd..." as she starts to break down.
Det. Norris replies "It's okay Sarah."
His partner Jack interrupts "Mike we gotta go. We got the suspect cornered at Wabash, and VanBuren." They both rush out of there like it was they're only mission.
We see an open shot of a department store. Detective Norris now on the scene says, "What do we got?"
An officer in uniform replies "He’s holding himself up in that store. We fired shots at him, but he fired right back"
Norris asks "Does he have any hostages?"
The officer replies "None that we know of and we believe he doesn't, but we're not taking any chances. We should wait for the big boys to get here before we take any actions."
Det. Norris, without hesitation, rushes right over to the department store and let's himself in by going through the broken glass Charles left behind.
His partner, Jack, yells "Mike, are you crazy?... Comeback here!"
Keeping himself at guard walking around with his gun ready to be used, we hear a loud speaker system kick in then a sick, slithery voice says "Hi Mikey... I can see you... I'm every where Mikey!"
He replies "Give it up Ray, it's over. Turn yourself in and I'll see what I can do to help you proper care."
Charles replies in now a more abrupt voice "Not a *censored*in’ chance!" as then we here the click of the speaker system shutting off.
Charles is now on the prowl and he sees Det. Norris through random merchandise and takes a shot but misses. Both men hunched down going through the aisles like a children's game hoping to find one another and shoot the other dead. Mike hears a noise and fires off. A bullet comes through and hits Charles right in the chest.
He is still able to walk but he is losing lots of blood. He still crouches down in the aisles then comes across an elderly janitor who is sitting on the ground and has his hand covering his head.
The janitor says "Please don't shoot!"
Charles grabs him by his arm and says "You're coming with me."
He gets up with the janitor and runs towards a service elevator…
“Freeze Ray!”
Charles turns around and says “I am getting the *censored* outta here.”
Mike says “No Ray, it’s over, let the man go.”
Charles then points his gun at the man and says “I told you, I am getting out of here now put down your *censored*in’ weapon.”
Mike says “Okay Ray, you win.”
He slowly goes to put down the weapon making eye contact with the janitor as if trying to tell him to do something. The janitor then quickly slips away from Charles’ grasp and before Charles could even react, Det. Norris fires off 3 rounds into his chest.
Charles stumbles over to Det. Norris in which he catches him and Charles says “Too bad Mikey. We’ve been playing this game for a while and I feel like we just got acquainted.”
Det. Norris says “It didn’t have to be this way Charles.”
Charles then says as he coughs up blood “My friend’s call me Chucky. *cough, cough* we’re not done you and I. I am coming to get you and your sweet young daughter too Mikey. You and I… are friends till the end”
Then he drops.
Mike replies “Sick *censored*ing psycho”
Child's Play
Chapter 1: Let’s meet Charles
We are in an underground subway station where we a see a beautiful woman in her late 20's waiting alone for the next train. A relatively handsome man, with long dark brown hair, which appears to be in his late 20's early 30's approaches her and asks “Do you have a light?”
Slightly weary of him yet slightly attracted by him she replies "No sorry I don't smoke," with a nervous smile.
He says "That's okay, it isn't like smoking is what's going to kill you anyway."
She replies "Wha...." and before even finishing a word he grabs her, puts his gloved hand over her mouth and drags her away.
We are then taken to a strange looking room that is dark, and has hardwood floors. We see the woman restrained by each limp being tied down by a leather strap and each strap being nailed into the floor. Beneath her is a pentagram that is drawing out in sand, and she is surrounded by candles. She looks over and up to her left and sees this man that did this to her. He is lighting candles at what appears to be a mantle with a mirror hanging above. He is wearing leather pants, with no shirt.
A very attractive blonde walks in and says "When will the ritual begin?"
He says "Oh... very soon" then they share a rather lustful kiss.
He then gets down on his knees above where this woman’s head is resting. The blonde woman puts a cloak on him, and then hands him a rather strange looking knife. He then starts saying all these weird words and speaking in tongues. He clasps the knife with both hands and raises it high above his head as his words intensify in volume. We see the woman trying desperately to scream through her duct taped mouth as tears flow from her eyes. We see the knife go down and the scene cuts to black.
We are then taken to this same scene but hours later where a forensic team is there investigating. We pan over to a man who appears to be angry, and in disbelief at the same time.
A man walks over to him and says "Detective Norris, we found this note." The note reads "Hi Mikey, Nice try but you're too late once again." in which this note bears a weird emblem.
This isn’t the first note that this Detective has received from this maniac. Frustrated by the note he scampers off stomping his feet and slamming everything he comes across that isn't part of the crime scene.
His partner tries to calm him down but he replies "What does it take to get this sick bastard off of my streets?" He then huffs and puffs and sighs "Ah... we have once again tell someone's family that their daughter has been killed."
We then cut to a scene in which this time this maniac not only have one, but two victims in what appears to be a hotel room. He tells his lover, who’s wearing some sort of ritual mask, to take the one of the victims to the bathroom and get her prepared. As she does the woman having her mouth and hands duct taped together kicks his lover in her legs in and runs out of the hotel room.
He screams "NOOOOOOO!"
His lover says "I’m sorry; I am so sorry"
He grabs her by the hair and says "We don't have time for this shit. We need to get the *censored* out of here."
She then says "What about her?" referring to the other girl tied on the bed.
He says "Here is what I am going to do about this *censored*" as he grasps her neck with both hands to strangle her and she is dead within seconds.
The woman who escaped is now at the police station sitting with Detective Mike Norris.
He says "Now Sarah, please tell me everything you know about this man."
Still shaken and just finding out her best friend didn't make it out alive, she says "I know him, his name is Charles Lee Ray. He attends an art class I belong to. I knew he was different, quiet, but always friendly... I didn't think... he'd..." as she starts to break down.
Det. Norris replies "It's okay Sarah."
His partner Jack interrupts "Mike we gotta go. We got the suspect cornered at Wabash, and VanBuren." They both rush out of there like it was they're only mission.
We see an open shot of a department store. Detective Norris now on the scene says, "What do we got?"
An officer in uniform replies "He’s holding himself up in that store. We fired shots at him, but he fired right back"
Norris asks "Does he have any hostages?"
The officer replies "None that we know of and we believe he doesn't, but we're not taking any chances. We should wait for the big boys to get here before we take any actions."
Det. Norris, without hesitation, rushes right over to the department store and let's himself in by going through the broken glass Charles left behind.
His partner, Jack, yells "Mike, are you crazy?... Comeback here!"
Keeping himself at guard walking around with his gun ready to be used, we hear a loud speaker system kick in then a sick, slithery voice says "Hi Mikey... I can see you... I'm every where Mikey!"
He replies "Give it up Ray, it's over. Turn yourself in and I'll see what I can do to help you proper care."
Charles replies in now a more abrupt voice "Not a *censored*in’ chance!" as then we here the click of the speaker system shutting off.
Charles is now on the prowl and he sees Det. Norris through random merchandise and takes a shot but misses. Both men hunched down going through the aisles like a children's game hoping to find one another and shoot the other dead. Mike hears a noise and fires off. A bullet comes through and hits Charles right in the chest.
He is still able to walk but he is losing lots of blood. He still crouches down in the aisles then comes across an elderly janitor who is sitting on the ground and has his hand covering his head.
The janitor says "Please don't shoot!"
Charles grabs him by his arm and says "You're coming with me."
He gets up with the janitor and runs towards a service elevator…
“Freeze Ray!”
Charles turns around and says “I am getting the *censored* outta here.”
Mike says “No Ray, it’s over, let the man go.”
Charles then points his gun at the man and says “I told you, I am getting out of here now put down your *censored*in’ weapon.”
Mike says “Okay Ray, you win.”
He slowly goes to put down the weapon making eye contact with the janitor as if trying to tell him to do something. The janitor then quickly slips away from Charles’ grasp and before Charles could even react, Det. Norris fires off 3 rounds into his chest.
Charles stumbles over to Det. Norris in which he catches him and Charles says “Too bad Mikey. We’ve been playing this game for a while and I feel like we just got acquainted.”
Det. Norris says “It didn’t have to be this way Charles.”
Charles then says as he coughs up blood “My friend’s call me Chucky. *cough, cough* we’re not done you and I. I am coming to get you and your sweet young daughter too Mikey. You and I… are friends till the end”
Then he drops.
Mike replies “Sick *censored*ing psycho”